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Rams Write

Here you'll find a student-generated guide to writing and composition.

Example

Example 1

Incorrect: Organic vegetables are healthy.

Correct:  Because the pesticide levels in organic vegetables are monitored so often, they are healthier compared to non-organic vegetables.

Explanation: This topic sentence tells you that organic vegetables and non-organic vegetables are being compared. It also argues that organic vegetables are healthier than non-organic vegetables.

An image showing a 'Topic Sentance Checklist':

"A topic sentence has several important functions: it substantiates or supports an essay's thesis statement, it unifies the content of a paragraph and directs the order of the sentences, and it advises the reader of the subject to be discussed and how the paragraph will discuss it" (Writing Tutorial Services).